Swan Song

I rarely throw a prologue on these, but I've changed this around thirty times since i originally wrote it. take a look at it and tell me what you think, i'd like input from people because I think this has the most potential of anything I've written.

and if I’m immortal
please tell them my story
I know it feels easy
to put me to rest

sell me your vision
my blind eyes are bloodied
and breathing comes easy
once you open your chest